In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are different opinions regarding this issue whether spending a lot of money on new railway lines is essential or it
should be spent on public transport. According to surveys both building railway lines and facilitating current public
transport can be necessary. Both views will discuss and an opinion will be given at the end.
Some argue that building new railway system is more important than improving public transport due to the fact that fast
trains are new technology that excel people’s life. Therefore, new railway lines are necessary to save people who spend
most of their time on trains travelling to different cities. For example, in Iran with old rail way line the distance between
Tehran to Mashhad was 8hours and now with the new railways line and fast trains is about 5 hours.
Despite the argument mentioned above, opponents believe that improving public transport is more important than building
new railway system. Firstly, most of the people use public transport everyday more than those who use trains; therefore, it
is more necessary to enhance public transport facilities. For instance, in cities like Delhi, Moscow and London 60 to 70% of
people use public transport daily. Secondly, the quality of air is in dangerous situation in many countries because of traffic
and overcrowded streets. If public transport improves more people will use it and consequently air pollution will decrease.
The most obvious example is Tehran that most of the citizens prefer to use their own private vehicle instead of public
transport that is too crowded and it is not enough for the population.
In conclusion, both new railway lines and enhancing the remaining public transport is essential, it is considered
progressing public transport is more necessary than constructing new railway lines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6909790015 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52397260274 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1280707058 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396978762358 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146838158144 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745750365 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136865000426 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584021278436 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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