The quality of education is an important part of student's lives. Effective teaching procedure leads to more reliable student in near future. Actually, more than a few students have enough knowledge to deal with essential problems in their professional career. The most important question regarding this is that if the education quality will be more effective by increasing salaries of professors. From my point of view, I assert that the university should increase professor's salary and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First, by increasing the amount of money, professors would be enthusiastic to do their job. Albeit, the money is not the most important part of education but It can solve most of the professor's problem; The differences between professors in different university in my country is a good example of this. Accordingly, in my country 'IRAN', professors who serves their job in governmental university such as "Sharif university " make more budget than those of in private university. According to a new research, the professors of governmental university assign more time to their students and this helped the education to be more effective in that area. So, that research taught me that money can increase the level of quality in universities.
In addition, professors work in fewer hours during the week. According to this, usual time of working in each week is 40 hours but if they make more money the office hours will be reduced to less than 30 which will result in higher quality in education. For example, the time that I was in master, new role raised professor's salary and attenuate their weekly hours; Afterward, the professors spend more time on students and solve more problem. Based on university, that change increases grade of student which have direct correlation to quality of education.
Finally, professors will have more time to do publication. This is an important point in level of education of country. For instance, the country that emerge more article in authentic journals, will have higher rank. So, this is the best epitome of education quality which defines as production of science.
All in all, as the aforementioned examples have illustrated, professors should have more salary that helps education to have more quality. Not only professor will have more enthusiastic but also it decreases work hours and helps professors to participate in publication. Therefore, I think that university should increase the income of professor for better quality in education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
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Suggestion: professors'; professor's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2603406326 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9192639565 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452554744526 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1921819883 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.952380952 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299634810087 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938839103934 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716690404001 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175557443328 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477325848954 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18 Out of 30
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