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There has been some debate among scientists whether the increase in the humans population cause decline in the birds population. The lecture claims that the birds population has been increased by the increase of the humans population. However, the reading refutes stating that there is decline in the birds population.
The first point of dispute is if the birds natural habitat decrease with the increase of the humans population. The lecturer says that in the urban and suburban places people are developing better and larger habitats for many types of birds. In contrast people in these places are complaining from the increase of the bird population. The reading contradicts this point saying that the increase in the humans population leads to vanish in the birds habitat.
Another controversial issue is if using land for agriculture cause decline in the birds habitat. The lecture contends that the increase in the agriculture is done by increasing the use of more productive crops, not by the use of more lands. But, the reading refutes this point stating that for the agriculture activities to keep in pace with the increase in the humans population, people are using birds habitat to plant more crops.
The final point of dispute is if the using of pesticides decrease the birds population. The lecture says that the people todays are aware with the consequences of using pesticides. So companies tend to use two different types of pesticides. The first one is the less toxic one. The second one is pets resistances one, which is less attractive to birds. However, the reading opposes stating that birds are easily affected by pesticides either by eating infected insects or by drinking contaminated water. That lead to the decline in the birds habitat.
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...mans population leads to vanish in the birds habitat. Another controversial iss...
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... water. That lead to the decline in the birds habitat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12837837838 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74640345199 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425675675676 0.540411800872 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5692205662 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2941176471 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06452816374 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385357257899 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149240227665 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839777970741 0.0662205650399 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256911716448 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041919525566 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.