Parents are the best teachers. Agree or disagree?
Have you ever thought about the parents' teaching ability? Whom do you think when it comes to home cleaning tasks? Whom do you think that taught you how to washing the dishes cleaning your home by yourself? Obviously, they are your parents. The most best teachers that I have ever met in my life.They taught me how to cook, how to spend my money wisely, as well as treat with animals at ease.
First of all, I think that my parents made me learn about such house holding tasks as cooking, washing dishes, cleaning my home. I personally believe that these abilities are the most important factors to hold my life without any helps. Besides that, I am a future mother and my mother always show me how to be a good mother with her actions. For example: once she taught me about new born babies caring.Therefore, I have learnt how to care for my new born baby.
Also, they are the best teachers about an economical spend, which is never taught at the schools.For instance: they always give me 50 dollars to my monthly consume. Besides that money, they don't give me more money in one month. Therefore, I have learnt how to spend my money wisely after I declaring my independence my life.
Thirdly, they made me learn about how to care domestic pets and animals. For example: in my second-grade my father once bought me a dog in my birthday party as a present. Initially, I frightened because of that dog and avoided from my domestic animal. Eventually, with the help of my father I learnt how to care for animals. Additionally, after I step into the university I joined to the volunteer organization, which is helping to the animals.
All in all, I believe that my parents are the best teachers in the world, for these reasons. They have taught me many abilities, as well as skills. Eventually, with the help of my parents I think that I would never fail to the life. They made me learn the things that university will never teach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'best' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: best
...? Obviously, they are your parents. The most best teachers that I have ever met in my lif...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the best'.
Suggestion: most the best
...? Obviously, they are your parents. The most best teachers that I have ever met in my lif...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...eachers that I have ever met in my life.They taught me how to cook, how to spend my ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53008595989 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53753038103 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461318051576 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4237112644 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2857142857 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0540409920908 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216944734936 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390451011651 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420840861812 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376524830564 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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