In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
Over the last five decades, there are many discoveries in this world such as computer, antibiotics and the airplane. According to me, the computer is the tremendous invention in this universe.
We could say many reasons for the computer which is the best invention. In this essay, I am going to draft a few examples. Computer is the one which plays in all sectors and everywhere. Especially in the research center, it would be as essential equipment to send and receive data between space and earth. It is communicating with space jet and our researchers to process the discovers very easily. Even it is very incredible role in the satellite and collects all the information in the space. Mass media is more benefited from this computer via space station and computer. Eventually, we could transfer the text message and voice between the two locations through satellite.
In this world, the financial is the important role for all needs such as buying materials, selling, trading etc. So, in the banking system, computer is the brain for the bankers to save the data and do all money payroll system. The teller machine is an automatic function which could not work without computers. We could easily withdraw and deposit our currency in ATM with the help of computers.
In conclusion, Computer is prevailing in all departments in this world. In this century, the human beings could not animate without computer, because it is main component which is monitoring all the progression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...computer, antibiotics and the airplane. According to me, the computer is the tremendous inventi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98790322581 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75525406233 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2270552105 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3125 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581206587712 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204078278557 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301691044643 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046835036435 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490101448878 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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