In this day and age, some people think the minus effects of computer technologies has been more than their benefits. Although this notion accepted by a large number of people,
There are many of expert have a fully distinct view against this topic. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to promote worries among people about last computer technologies.
First and foremost, today, the anxiety of information security increased because the information became digitalized and due to their less volume, rob them became easier and faster.
For example, the personal information of company members or financial information of a bank can insert in a flash drive and to be sold by staff members.
Secondly, the cyber-attack is another problem and is a way of war between countries that have a lot of economic damages for a country that got attacked.
For instance, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers shows that attacked to many of governmental, banking, airport, powerhouse systems by hackers of enemy countries all around the world.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons for disapproval the computer technologies from people, in my personal sentiment, although these means have had many advantages for us, but their negative effects are far of their benefits regardless of security issues.
- Do you think that the English Language will continue to remain as the global language despite globalization?Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading. 77
- In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 88
- Some people think past history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion 82
- Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 77
- Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.'To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...efits. Although this notion accepted by a large number of people, There are many of expert have ...
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...iscuss why I agree with this statement. To begin with, there are various rea...
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...nemy countries all around the world. In conclusion, there are several compell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35840707965 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84215839794 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641592920354 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.255370114 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183788345305 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075394576828 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764195421361 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712732519814 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721041798623 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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