Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to express my joy and excitement to begin working with your company soon. Additionally, there are a couple of items that are needed to be present in my future office inevitably hence, I urge you to make them available as soon as possible for making my work feasible.
To embark upon, I will require two External hard drives of 1 TB each, a latest Laptop of "Lenovo" company with a wireless mouse and keypad along with a comfortable revolving chair. Allow me to explain the necessity of these belongings i.e. being a Software Engineer, It is pivotal for me to store the vast confidential data securely thus, hard drives are crucial for me. Plus, I am suffering from Disc prolapse which justifies the demand of a suitable chair and wireless gadgets.
Lastly, I firmly believe that it would be wise to buy all the electronic equipments from Nehru Place as it is the wholesale market and you will get everything at a very reasonable price. Furthermore, Furniture market is the best place to purchase a chair because it has a slew of distributors who provide such furniture at lesser rate.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
John
- WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTSYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are aw 73
- While your friend was away on vacation you stayed in his apartment While you were there you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it Write a letter to your friend and in your letter explain what happened apologize for the accident tell your friend how 76
- The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be mad 61
- You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you 88
- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party.You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.Write a letter to your neighour. In your letter-Introduce your self-Describe your plans for the party-Invite your neighbour to c 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am writing this letter to express my joy and excitement to begin working with yo...
^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...letter to express my joy and excitement to begin working with your company soon....
^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... two External hard drives of 1 TB each, a latest Laptop of 'Lenovo' com...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85514018692 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89042395087 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668224299065 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.428332277 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241809916076 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846553055762 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552285657301 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127456761582 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607651400978 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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