The modern life is very complex. The life pace has increased while gorgeous entertainments appear all in a sudden. Comparing to the “good old time”, people are busy dealing with all sorts of trifles. So it is essential for the young to have the ability to plan and organize.
To begin with, organizations and plans help you memory. Having a clear calendar for the next few days, you do not need to worry about forgetting any important matters. Notes are also of great help. You can pit it anywhere and write your appointments on it so that it can remind you every time you run into it. If one does not have the ability to plan or organize, he may get entangled by some unimportant cases like a football game or party and miss the deadline. With the help of a plan, you can catch up with all the tasks you are processing and no longer need to worry about forgetting any one of it.
Besides, good plan and organizations can save your time. In modern days, the life pace is very fast, people have to spend time on quite a large amount of trivial stuffs. The time is fragmentated. A plan can help you discern your spare time and maybe combine them together into a larger piece of time. For example, you can use the 5-minute rest time between classes doing some easy homework. As a result, you can save an hour after class time in total to do other things you like. Or, if you finish your homework everyday, then you can harvest a whole weekend, which, of course, you can spend with your family or your friends hanging out. The ability of plan and organize can put our broken time together and make the time used more efficient.
Last but not least, good plan can angle you to react to the emergencies immediately. In modern days, life changes swiftly. Accidents emerge out of nowhere. A good plan can tell you where you are heading and the alternatives. If you were to going out for a picnic in the weekend and it rained unfortunately, a good plan would tell you there are other good places to spend the weekend like a exhibit, or a maybe cottage nearby. Then you do not have to be blue all day long and go back to work upsettingly. A plan in need is a plan indeed.
According to what we have discussed above, organizations and plans can make the life more convenient. To adapt to the intricate modern world, the youngster should have the ability to plan and organize.
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- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...u like. Or, if you finish your homework everyday, then you can harvest a whole weekend, ...
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Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r good places to spend the weekend like a exhibit, or a maybe cottage nearby. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, while, for example, mind you, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46224256293 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47589428725 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494279176201 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5658853466 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2222222222 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1851851852 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29858290322 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999669172444 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787437448149 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198586469324 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514768517143 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.