Some people say that children should play games which requires a teamwork such as football and basketball in their timetable. Whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that in spare time, youngsters should play kinds of games like football and basketball which require teamwork. While I agree with this argument for some extends, I believe that children should also play individual games such as swimming and running.
On the one hand, in my opinion, there are several benefits for children when they play teammate games. Firstly, it is often more enjoyable when children can play with their friends. According to a recent research, scientists have confirmed that the number of children playing games with their peers is more satisfying than who play alone. Secondly, while joining in these types of games, children can learn how to communicate and be a part of a team. For example, in order to win a match of a game, they cannot rely on solely one person, so they have to work together and make a plan to achieve their goal.
On the other hand, I also believe participating in individual activities has many advantages. One advantage is that playing alone is much easier because they do not have to gather a group of people to operate a game. For instance, if a child wants to improve his running performance, instead of wasting time waiting to run with someone, he can practice whenever he wants. Another advantage is that the development of such crucial characteristic as independence is attributed mostly in doing individual activities. This ability plays an important role in the success of a person, because this kind of person is capable of leading other and achieve high goal.
In conclusion, although team activities have many positive consequences for children, individual games also have their own advantages. So, I would argue that children should play both types of games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9793814433 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71996980346 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1975538091 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310492517672 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105708633531 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875585080351 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204289765339 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123521207378 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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