While some folks consider that perfect health is imperative to each individual, hence medical facilities ought not to be operated by nonpublic companies, i completely disagree with the idea. This essay will discuss firstly the two drawbacks and secondly, why the advantages of private health care readily prevail the shortcomings with relevant examples.
On the one hand, the prohibitive cost of insurance policies is one of the major drawbacks of the private health care. Despite enjoying excellent health, a person has to make regular payments that typically do not cover 100 percent. In other wo...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1974 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.561 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.01 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 128 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.82 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.532 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conveniently eclipse the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70422535211 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10947640021 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630985915493 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4355006481 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.642857143 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29382083693 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902879288517 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606125621859 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144548120158 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089071737753 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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