Do you agree or disagree with this following statement,the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reason and example to support your answer
Taking trip is considered as one of the most delightful activities that people do, it is also strongly recommended by psychologist as way of taking away from depression and increasing longevity as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling into a better and more beneficial experience , personally i tend to be with a group wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.
some reason .
When a professional one accomany trippers , traveling will be a mre instructive experience.
Most of people are just pursuing pleasuring from their trip ,they observ tourism's attractions ,wherease almost know nothing about their historical backgroud ,but tour leaders usually have broad information about such affairs buildings' architecture , people who used to live there snd so on , tour guides' knowledge is not limited to places ,they also are familiar with customs and rituals belonging to a certain region and by itroducing them traveler no only recognize them but also will be able to communicate with inhabitants .for example we have so much annual religious ceremony in our country and when tourists participate in them ,feel getting close to nattives .
Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tours's guider usually create a schedule beforehand and decide based on that .tour leader 's acquaintance about a certain place lead to group's members dont miss visiting of any of attraction even ones which are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will have minimum wasted time and maximum efficiency from traveling .
Third tour leadering could be a source of income for both country and guiders .Appointing tour leaders in historical buildings is somehow creating a job's position and tourism foundation pay them salary .also
if a country purposes to make money from tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe some experts in traveling who are aware enough to introduce the country's attractions ,and encourage people to opt their country as their travel's destination.
Consequently ,i put in proposal that both people and governments have to pay more attention to getting help from tour leader, specially government should persuade students to follow this job academicly .
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- Do you disagree or disagree with this following statement?It is better knowledge to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to be specialized in one specific subject use specific readons and examples to support your answer 80
- Do you agree or disagree with this following statement the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guideUse specific reason and example to support your answer 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, so, third, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36968085106 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9710279238 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.40672076 48.9658058833 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.428571429 100.406767564 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.7142857143 20.6045352989 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 73.0 5.5376344086 1318% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133045908431 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642251951884 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210660598558 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592045646043 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222604460074 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 11.7677419355 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.01818996416 138% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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