Government spendings have been a controversial topic every time its being bought in to public attention. Everyone have they are own opinion about how and where the government should focus on their budget. Some people believe that state should give prior importance to public services rather than spending huge amount of money on arts. I completely agree with this statement.
Firstly, Public transport is the one of the main areas that authorities should focus their attention on. A good public transport system always represents the the growth and wealth of a nation. If a country has effective public transport system like trains, subways and road transport they can reduce ever increasing problems like traffic conjunction, pollution and road accidents. For instance, Singapore is following this model for a quite a lot of time. They have a perfect network of public transport system, people actually don't need to rely on private vehicle for their daily needs. The ever decreasing sale motor cars in Singapore is the sign of the people's choice of preference.
Secondly, regime's should give proper importance to spendings on public healthcare. People should get the proper medical care in spite of their wealth, gender or any such. It is one of the basic human needs. Nowadays not every one can afford the advanced medical care since it is becoming more costlier than ever before. The state should spend their funds on improving public health care facilities and ensure that everyone getting the same without any discrepancies. For example, Australia's public healthcare facilities are renowned around the world. Aussie people get full healthcare support from the public health care system to their entire life without paying much money, everyone have free access to the system.
Last but not least, the state should also ensure the safety of its people by providing a good low enforcement system. People feel free when they have full trust on country's sheriff department and judicial systems. When a country has strict rules and regulations as well as a good law enforcement system to carry out these norms, then citizen of that country feel safe to live there without any fear of crimes.
In conclusion, it is clear that all the governments around the world should give prior importance to public services rather than investing on arts. If a country once well sustained on their public services then they can shift their focus on spending on other things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13151364764 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51822290409 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526054590571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8150943178 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3181818182 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173864991977 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576560630358 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556508590674 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113848200387 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786070918456 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.