The given line graph indicates details about the number of visitors to three different museums in London during the period of four months from June 2013 to September 2013.
It is evident that the British museum housed most number of visitors in the four months period. In June the visitor figures were 600 thousand and in July there was a steep rise in the number of visitors as 750 thousand. But in the subsequent month showed a sudden decrease in the figures and touched as low as 500 thousand, then again there was a significant growth in the number of visitors and ended up with 650 thousand.
The science and natural history museum also received a decent number of visitors during the month of June as 400 and 550 thousand respectively. There was a gradual decrease in the figures of natural history museum till the month of August where it reached the lowest figure of 300 thousand. whereas science museum figures also showed a fluctuated number of visitors from 500 thousand visitors in the month July to 380 thousand visitors in August, then the figures were went up almost par with natural history museum figures which is 480 thousand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ory museum figures which is 480 thousand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77889447236 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35793545279 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467336683417 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0668016118 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158886564886 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100813372585 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871060565222 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159946487398 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102162664512 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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