These days people purchase numerous goods which are not completely necessary for them. This essay will examine the causes of this event, in addition, reveal benefits and disadvantages for the individuals and the community.
There is undeniable that compared to the past, population's standard of living has boosted sharply, people have been living in more convenient, comfortable conditions. It is worth noting that only wealthy people without thinking could afford to buy a good , these who possess a property, who are confident in the future. Unfortunately, modern life contains stressful, disturbance moment, for instance, computer breaks down, person lose all database. By buying new things, people make an attempt to lift their mood. The other main reason is an advertisement impacts on the desire to buying on a whim, giving rise to the consumer society. Enticing people causes a propensity to acquiring the things, encouraging people to use services which are not necessary to them . For example, people remain their old fashion cars and drive cars related to modern requirements of the changeable world.
In my perspective, it is not beneficial to the person, however, it is essential to society. Firstly, any advertisement of a good adds more expenditure for buyers since this price good includes the price of the advertisement, so any advertised item costs more than other one. For instance, advertised home on the market is more pricy than others which are traded. Secondly, people buy unnecessary goods , nevertheless, any thing requests care, and grab attention , as a result, people waste their lifetime. By contrast, the consumer society is increasing , hence economy of society become more significant since it allows to contribute to the development of manufactory productions.
In conclusion, an advertisement and stressful moments provoke a wishes for buying on a whim, a perchases will be not so expensive, if the price do not include the price of advertisement. Instead of spending time to care about unneeded goods, people could contribute own abilities, increase their opportunities. However, the community has a remarkable promotion as people's enhancing consumption because it promotes the financial position of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46991404011 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07699741886 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58452722063 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1225148657 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.294117647 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1566695765 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505685461395 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294972718475 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971655029583 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162819555715 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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