Law can change human's behavior, do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the phenomenon of law and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that imposing law is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by noticeable numbers of individuals. I am inclined to believe that enacting law can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, committing a crime can provide the society with undeniable effects which are rooted in the fact that juvenile delinquency, as well as aggressive behavior, are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the increasing rate of crime among children. Therefore, beneficial ramification both imposing hefty fines and punishment distinctly can be seen.
Within the realm of psychological science, executing prisoners might increase the consequence of violent culture. Moreover, detrimental aspects of the death penalty and severe punishment relate to this reality that the demerits of capital punishment pertain to discouraging people from breaking the legislation. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that re-offending crime is correlated negatively with involving with gangs. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of sensational crime.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I firmly believe that the benefits of obeying law far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only does enforce strict laws prove the significance of rehabilitation, but also pinpoints social and personal implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7380952381 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27605742932 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674603174603 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1483360663 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100614396807 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332070142332 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317363847236 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576143583416 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366478901834 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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