Does law induce a change in the people's behavior?
Does law induces a change in the general behavior of the people is the topic under debate. Laws and regulations are developed by the government to maintain a more civilized nation. They are meant to be followed in order to remain on the safe side and traverse through one's path easily without any hurdle. I will express complete disagreement with this statement and will offer reasons to support my viewpoint.
Besides, of being a more organized nation with the practice of laws, it also helps in reducing the crime rate to a certain extent but not eliminating it completely.The sense of the fear from the punishment of not following the rule is the most disturbing which forces the citizen to oblige by them. There are many practices that we are doing out of the habit. For example, stopping on the red signal, giving an indicator before making a turn and wearing the seat belt before driving are the actions that we are doing without even realizing.
Laws and regulations help to mold our behavior in a manner which is beneficial for us but it is not producing a complete alteration. Still, there are robberies, road accidents and shoplifts. Although the laws are there, the important thing is that one should follow them strictly.
To wrap up and in the view of the above-presented points, I still advocate that by following rules and regulations, one can become more self-disciplined and organized but it will not completely alter his behavior as it depends on many other factors as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'induce'?
Suggestion: induce
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Message: Did you mean 'induce'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84435797665 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79624442357 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4108307104 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18014261382 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780869363533 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159989834092 0.071462118173 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103067847781 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989875526153 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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