The popularity of the extreme or the adventurous sports has grown over the last decade. These sports activities are exercised to a higher degree, greater altitude and much physical exertion. This essay will compare both the pros and cons of performing these activities and my viewpoints for which holds more weight-age will be provided.
Firstly, as these are outdoor dangerous activities so it requires the performer to come out of his comfort zone and think out of the box. Any kind of physical outdoor activity like para-gliding, scuba diving, water-rifting, skiing and bungee jumping requires one to involve the interaction between a large number of groups of muscles so it promotes a larger amount of physical exercise as compared to the indoor activity. Secondly, it helps to develop self-motivation, confidence and determination in one's self and therefore eliminates the negative feelings such as lack of confidence and depression.
As these are sophisticated activities so high level of skills and precise timings are very important. A small single mistake can lead to serious injuries. For example, in the case of snowboarding, as these are exercised over uneven terrains with many avalanches, so there is a good probability that a fallen tree may be hidden beneath huge deposition of snow drifts and un-cautiously an athlete can collide with it, producing severe impact and pains.
In the view of the above discussion and the provided arguments, I personally support these extreme activities but initially, these should be implemented under the supervision of an expert guide as to avoid self-damage in the future.
Dangerous activities like extreme
skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether u support them or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 20.9802955665 5% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 31.9359605911 3% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 84.0 1207.87684729 7% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 15.0 242.827586207 6% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.96798967127 3.92707691288 50% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.47296493213 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 15.0 139.433497537 11% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.580463131201 172% => OK
syllable_count: 24.3 379.143842365 6% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 7.0 20.5024630542 34% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.0 50.4703680194 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.0 104.977214359 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 7.5 20.9669160288 36% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0576462810514 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361200180232 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361200180232 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551088519277 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551088519277 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.37 53.1260098522 121% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.9458128079 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 6.0 55.0591133005 11% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 9.94827586207 30% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.8 10.3980295567 46% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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