Effect of the native region in one's success achievement.
Many people are of the view that the success of any person is largely affected by his or her native region. This essay will express complete disagreement with this statement and will offer reasons to support the viewpoint.
By success, we mean the acquaintance of prestigious position, monitory gains and bright secured future. The success for any person heavenly lies on hard work, determination, clear vision of goals and ambitions. There is no shortcut to success and one has to definitely struggle at an earlier or later stage in order to achieve it.
There are examples in front of us like the great personalities of Mr. Abdus Salam, Mr. Billgates, Mr. Abdul Qadeer who had burnt the midnight oil to acquire the respectable position and in setting the example for the world.
It is also deniable that the moral support from the true friends, parents and cohesive environment does not play a pivotal point in easing the path for one's success and traversing through but again the most important aspects are self-determination, performing out of the comfort zone, thinking out of the box and commitment to the struggle. Life is not a bed of roses and one has to carve his own pathway towards the success.
To wrap up, in the view of the above discussion, the native region has a trivial effect on one's achievement of success with determination and self-motivation being static parameters under all circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... a pivotal point in easing the path for ones success and traversing through but agai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98739495798 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94899620743 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4925262424 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.888888889 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255695224679 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100626011221 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084673249414 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128278896551 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853543644712 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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