Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Day by day vegetarianism is getting wider and many people reject eating meat, especially they are going to avoid of eating red meat. Vegetarianism may be because of different reasons: traditions, cultures, religion and so on.
People who made their minds to be vegetarian think that, avoiding of meat and meat products can help them to be health, meanwhile it can be very good in order to eliminate food issues around the world, and the world food reservation would be enough for humankind.
In my opinion, vegetarianism would be better in terms of keeping off to kill animals. However, being a vegetarian could be so hard for some societies, especially whose cuisines based on meat and meat products. For example, being a vegetarian might seem easier in Europe than other cultures. Because in European countries, including European Union, meat and meat products are not delicious and they contain of many chemical ingredients, which are dangerous for human health.
On the other hand, if a person decides to be a vegetarian, it is easy for him or her to find every kind of vegetables and vegetarian staff from markets and shops in EU countries. However, some countries, that their cuisine based on meat products, for example, Turkey, Azerbaijan, it is really difficult to be vegetarian because of lack of traditional cuisine, culture differences and so forth.
Thirdly, as it mentioned above, some cuisines are based on just meat products. If a person wants to be a vegetarian, he or she can encounter various difficulties: such as finding appropriate foods, varieties of vegetables and situations in family members.
Overall, though all its difficulties, today, vegetarianism has been preferred by many people around the globe. And it is new trend for the world community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12371134021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93925944957 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7932766448 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146992305185 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615896748999 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417243563157 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084068111898 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308287512071 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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