Some people believe that human behavior can be changed by laws; others argue that laws have little effect on human behavior. Which opinion do you agree with? Please explain.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'teenager' (without 'Most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: Teenager
Most teenager nowadays they end up to be married at a...
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Before
...end up to be married at an earlier aged.Before they can find a well paid job . Firs...
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...end up to be married at an earlier aged.Before they can find a well paid job . Firs...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ged.Before they can find a well paid job . First, As you can see in some rural ...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...u can see in some rural areas there are a lots of couple who decide to have a family e...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun couple seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of couples'.
Suggestion: lots of couples
...can see in some rural areas there are a lots of couple who decide to have a family even withou...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...en they can do it without any hindrance.If a women get pregnant suddenly she can d...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...they can do it without any hindrance.If a women get pregnant suddenly she can decide to...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ey can do it without any hindrance.If a women get pregnant suddenly she can decide to...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I have a classmate when we are secondary in high school she get pregnant already ...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...en we are secondary in high school she get pregnant already and decide to get marr...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'continues'.
Suggestion: continues
...t married as a young age. But she still continue studying until she deliver her baby , o...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'delivers'.
Suggestion: delivers
...t she still continue studying until she deliver her baby , our school didnt tell him to...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...inue studying until she deliver her baby , our school didnt tell him to stop to go...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...until she deliver her baby , our school didnt tell him to stop to go school in fact s...
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Line 3, column 842, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...w up she can find a good job. I believe its up to the person if she is responsible...
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Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I believe its up to the person if she is responsible enough and can manage sam...
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Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... up to the person if she is responsible enough and can manage same task at a t...
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Line 3, column 893, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he person if she is responsible enough and can manage same task at a time. ...
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Line 3, column 909, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is responsible enough and can manage same task at a time. Secondly,In our...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...anage same task at a time. Secondly,In our modern life in this word sometimes ...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...dern life in this word sometimes parent cant do anything if there siblings want to h...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...children are one of the major influences , as they can see whats happening in thei...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... the major influences , as they can see whats happening in their surroundings they mi...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...k that it is very easy to raise a family .But still if you are a talented and good...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...that it is very easy to raise a family .But still if you are a talented and good in...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ented and good in business you can get a job by your own profit.Like for example ...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Like
...s you can get a job by your own profit.Like for example a Korean businessman thru ...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it.Like for example a Korean businessman thru online buy and sell now as you can...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le a Korean businessman thru online buy and sell now as you can see she make a b...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...it and have a two store in downtown area .Finishing studies is not all the time is...
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Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finishing
... and have a two store in downtown area .Finishing studies is not all the time is benefici...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mankind. Therefore, in conclusion we cant say all the time that we should be luck...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we should be lucky in finding a good job because we have a degree ,we should kept...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing a good job because we have a degree ,we should kept in mind its depend on the...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...e should kept in mind its depend on the persons ability how to tackle her own pathway i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 20.9802955665 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 360.0 242.827586207 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28611111111 5.00649968141 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43001441585 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.413587809 50.4703680194 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.444444444 104.977214359 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.9669160288 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.33497536946 675% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103851716948 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495753908104 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243621525513 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600792296397 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249797515887 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.9458128079 151% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.5310837438 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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