Great places to be

Essay topics:

Great places to be

Which of the cities would you like to visit? Why?
If I have a chance to visit a foreign city, the first choice comes to my mind will be New York. New York is a beautiful city with a lot of attractive scenes, various culture and a lot of unusual buildings. Come in New York is my dream because I want to acquire civilized and modern in one of the world’s leading cities. I hope expand mine knowledge and learn from essence of humanity as well as contemplate the wonderful architecture here. Moreover, I desire to study and work in New York. Hopefully, I’ll get to New York in one day.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 487.0 1615.20841683 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 111.0 315.596192385 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38738738739 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61543804971 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 176.041082164 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 506.74238477 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1666578549 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5714285714 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0282088950958 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124303356435 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304479796581 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0147498540465 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147498540465 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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