For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary.
To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?
In the modern society, quality of life has dramatically changed over decades. The perception of shopping has greatly evolved, as nowadays people tend to acquire retail therapy passing their time in commercial centers. Although, some people treat stores as the most multifunctional places where one can satisfy social and purchasing purposes, I do agree that such a tremendous change isn’t worth it.
On the one hand, shopping has become preferable over other types of leisure activities and hobbies as it is considered to be the way of rewarding themselves for hard working. Shoppers aver they feel contented and relaxed when they window shop and acquire various goods. For instance, more and more people share their shopping experience as one of the vital points in their lives in social networks like Instagram, VK and so on. Hence, the crucial point is that buyers not only satisfy their ambitions but they improve the country’s economy.
On the other hand, spending money or walking around supermarket involves less physical and mental activities and finally escalates person's negligence not only to their own health but also to imagination. Humans develop more and more materialistic values preferring brand names’ items to crafting. For example, even modern children favor to receive expensive goods from the market rather than hand-made present. Thus, the society is becoming more shopaholic spending their hard-earned money on purchasing unnecessary things from malls.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the disadvantages of the shopping malls outweigh the advantages. People should consider visiting malls only to purchase necessary products and should not make a compulsory activity wasting their precious time there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51111111111 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80686987916 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8605239362 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163063873514 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518847404795 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318285512191 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950001032198 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233955074573 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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