One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times, medical assistance is provided to a greater part of population than in the past, and as result, longevity and average lifespan are rising. However, I do not think that this equals to have a better life.
On one hand, thanks to modern surgery many patients can receive organs’ transplant, most of the injuries are healed and unbelievable successes have been achieved by biotechnologies. Most of all, many deathly diseases were almost eliminated throughout the last century.
On the other hand, living longer does not mean that the quality of life has also improved. Nowadays there are many elders who live until 90 years old thanks to machines and pills inside rest homes. But in my opinion spending decades assisted by nurses, unable to do anything by ourselves it is a meaningless and not worth the effort.
To sum up, more attention should be paid to how people is living more than how much they are living., using more wisely the available resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99393939394 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6711119973 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.721212121212 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5354950014 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146497205772 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612990863099 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623442424922 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759244856273 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462035885312 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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