People naturally resist making changes in their lives What kind of problems can this cause What solutions can you suggest

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

It is obvious that people are unwilling to make changes in their lives after being accustomed to a certain style of life. However, these resistances against changes might face some severe problems and some solutions need to be done to minimize these predicaments to some extent.

First, unchangeable life could hinder our self-development in some ways. In other words, those who always stay in a comfort zone instead of taking new, risky things in their lives might lose the chance to nurture their own growth. For instance, some people refuse to go abroad because of their "unsecured fears”; apparently, they might be afraid of “culture shock” or they simply satisfy their old life in their own country. Consequently, people might lose out on opportunities to broaden their horizons as well as challenge themselves.

Second, different generations in a family might have bitter experiences in their relationship if they always resist all changes in their lives, especially for the old people. We all know that the viewpoint of one generation is in some way incompatible with that of the other generation, and so conflicts between them are seemingly inevitable. Therefore, if people do not learn how to accept a new way of thinking or have a flexible state of mind, their relationships could become worse.

Likewise, any problem has its answer, these predicaments can be unsolved. For individuals, the option is to be braver enough to welcome their own opportunities. For society, people should be encouraged to spend much more time together. Furthermore, a good idea is for everyone to change their minds for the betterment of our society.

In conclusion, it is essential for people to make careful decisions towards changes in their lives but we should not completely ignore the possibilities of a radical life bringing to us.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple refuse to go abroad because of their 'unsecured fears'; apparently,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22742474916 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06323478441 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.943104622 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187715900635 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668591719085 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418588449263 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10849853242 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021931442216 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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