People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
Changes in one's life often bring with numerous challenges and hurdles. Also, people are extremely uncomfortable with irregularities happening in their way of living and goes on resisting it and this can cause serious problems such laziness leading to delays of completion of work and evolution of one's mind will cease to exist. And the solutions will be discussed in this essay.
To start with, the first issue by the result of not making any changes in life could make people lethargic. Due to the fact being lazy most individual tend to fall in a trap known as procrastination which is commonly described as extending deadlines of jobs. Moreover, the habit like such could hurt the professional life in one's career which in turn could result in being fired from their respective working environment. For example, recently there was a huge lay off being done by renowned IT companies such as Google and twitter where in total around 15000 employees had to lose their job as they were so not compatible enough to complete their task in time. And the one of the impactful solution is to being involved in various kind of activities for instance going for camp or hiking that could result in making them more proactive in their work life eventually making them indifferent to changes in their lives.
From time immemorial, different types of variation in human life has resulted in development the way they think. Resistance to the change in one's way of living will severely impact the way they think. Moreover, generation of new ideas could not be possible which may have consequence in invention and discoveries in science and technology. One good way to resolve this is to undertake various problems such as participating in works involving artistic creation like painting where we can develop our creativity which would assist in the development of the thought process which
To sum up, laziness and stagnation of mind of an individual are the main problems which are caused by resisting various changes in a person's life. To overcome this people have to perform task which can level up their energy such as hiking and camping also some involvement in creational activities like painting which could aid in the process of thinking.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Changes in ones life often bring with numerous challeng...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... of completion of work and evolution of ones mind will cease to exist. And the solut...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...uch could hurt the professional life in ones career which in turn could result in be...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...they think. Resistance to the change in ones way of living will severely impact th...
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Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance to the change in ones way of living will severely impact the way they think....
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Line 6, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...development of the thought process which To sum up, laziness and stagnation of mi...
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Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...aused by resisting various changes in a persons life. To overcome this people have to p...
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Line 8, column 160, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... changes in a persons life. To overcome this people have to perform task which can l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97606382979 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71292109485 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1958682756 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.923076923 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219755428907 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796814268303 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663865482934 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150144885696 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524324842408 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Changes in ones life often bring with numerous challeng...
^^^^
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... of completion of work and evolution of ones mind will cease to exist. And the solut...
^^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...uch could hurt the professional life in ones career which in turn could result in be...
^^^^
Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...they think. Resistance to the change in ones way of living will severely impact th...
^^^^
Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance to the change in ones way of living will severely impact the way they think....
^^^
Line 6, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...development of the thought process which To sum up, laziness and stagnation of mi...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...aused by resisting various changes in a persons life. To overcome this people have to p...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 160, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... changes in a persons life. To overcome this people have to perform task which can l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97606382979 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71292109485 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1958682756 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.923076923 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219755428907 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796814268303 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663865482934 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150144885696 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524324842408 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.