Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that disclosure of personal information is advantageous or disadvantageous. Sometimes, candidates, the personal information helps employers analysis a candidate whereas some people this such information can be misleading.
Frist let's discuss why personal information can be a boon to employers. There are many factors that can be analysed by understanding candidates likes, dislikes, and marital status. For example, many companies these days have made it mandatory to undergo their candidates' psychometric tests apart from technical skills examinations. This has aided organisation to hire genuine profiles.
As every coin has two sides, similarly every thought has two different aspects, one positive and another negative. Revealing such sensitive details can also lead to discrimination. Some personnel might scrutinize the profiles based on whether they are married or unmarried. Unmarried women can have better chances of getting jobs compared to married females.
Caste or religion could be another factor of such perception. Hobbies could be analysed in a wrong way such as playing video games, enjoy trekking, singing, etc. The person could be judged based on their likings and dislikings which can lead to incorrect hiring.
In my opinion, sharing personal information while face to face interview is the best ice-breaker. Hence such information should be shared when the role applied for demands. Although it should not be a mandate to mention in the curriculum vitae.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...h perception. Hobbies could be analysed in a wrong way such as playing video games, enjoy trek...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...face interview is the best ice-breaker. Hence such information should be shared when ...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ared when the role applied for demands. Although it should not be a mandate to mention i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66079295154 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0439094173 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669603524229 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8488244622 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271921177066 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784184872779 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606334623706 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137989446809 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477249895622 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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