Nowadays in the era of technology, the internet has become part of our life, technology has had an impact on trade structure , numerous businesses are attempting to advertise and sell their purchase via the Internet. Online shopping is the convenient popular way to acquire a good, a majority of people opt this attractive type of purchasing which does not require much time . Certainly, any activity exerts an influence, this essay will examine this influence on the environment and employment.
It seems undeniable that a retail trade is the one direction of many sell businesses which reaps substantial profits for business owners. One of the main approaches of a retail trade is online shoppings which represents countless websites disseminating profound information of any exposed products, services. People without a lot effort can choose goods , compare price, quality with other products, services in the same category by browsing the net. Thus, compared to three decades ago when people were to attend several stores to find suitable goods, these days, by browzing websites , a person can find necessary goods, services without shopping . Thereby, people save their valuable time and, additionlly they use less vehicles, diminishing carbon dioxide emissions , so environmental repercussion has become essentially preferred and traffic congestion has effected dramatically . Moreover, by less using transport, people preserve natural resources, such as fuel, gas.
It is worth remarking that online shopping is beneficial to business owners because it allows avoiding the necessity of renting the pricy store , they need only a building for storing goods, thus financial budgets of business individuals are boosted, consequently, they are able to refurbish structure, to expand business, creating more vacancies with high-level income salaries which deter professionals and motivate them work more productively . Without a doubt, for instance, IT positions will be demanded because online shopping requests websites, advertisement which should serve technically flawlessly, because it plays a significant role in contributing to the development of business. Therefore, online purchasing is the positive outcome, improving employment of the society.
In conclusion, online shopping does not cause detrimental results, but oppositely, brings advantages for mankind, firstly, it decreases contamination of air, conserves nuture resouses, reduces pollution. Secondly, fortunately, it decreases unemployment, giving ample opportunities to realise personal abilities in achieving own goals.
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell Do you agree or disagree Include relevant examples from your own experience 83
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- In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company Some people think this isn t justified Do you agree or disagree 80
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society? 84
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92245989305 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11711295682 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671122994652 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4569281745 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.214285714 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124735043429 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041529450176 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429238665264 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076176908359 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476288969589 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 78.4519038076 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.