It seems that nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. For some people, it is medium to spread news & awareness to others whereas for some others, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion on this? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In this days, TV has become a substantial part of our living to get news and entertainment.I think the TV can be a benefit device to announce people and also present information of science. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of the beneficial TV programs.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support Television as an effective device and an essential part of life. Although watching too much TV has negative effects on personality, it can represent diverse news to people. For example, there are many news TV channels that spread the different news in regard to events, new technologies, scientific researchers and etc from around the world in each day.
In addition, while some Tv programs are harmful to children, it can be entertainment and its scientific programs have the positive effect on the level of people's public knowledge. For instance, a recent research conducted by MGB University researchers in 2014 shows that a significant number of scientific programs in TV channels have a high value to increase the people's knowledge.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about TV performances, my personal sentiment is that TV can have many advantages by its scientific and news programs and also it can create a fun time for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03271028037 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00388792235 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57476635514 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4840433725 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.625 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.25397266985 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226711034715 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108439666414 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480610811491 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140662304058 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592852650861 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.