Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.
What is your opinion?
These days, different companies worldwide are hiring males and females. Some people believe that women have the right to work at any job, while others argue that men and women have different capabilities, and women should not be treated equally to men. This essay will discuss the reason why women should be treated equally to men without any distinction.
Women should have the same opportunity to work as men. Nowadays, women are graduating from universities and they are owning the same skills and knowledge of men. For example, the recent study, which was conducted in the USA, has shown that the number of women who have graduated from American universities is equal to the number of men, and consequently, they own the knowledge and skills which enable them to work at any company. Therefore, women must have the equal opportunities with men to work without any distinction.
On the other hand, some people think that some jobs could not be performed by women. They claim some jobs need physical requirements which do not exist in women. For example, working in militaries, this job requires men with special capabilities. But these people are unaware of the fact that these armies nowadays do not request special need. Thus, women can work at any job without any distinction with men.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why females have the right to be hired equally to men without any distinction. In my opinion, women own skills and knowledge to work at any career similar to men.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-26 | satwinders1 | 56 | view |
| 2022-07-20 | Yuli | 85 | view |
- Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree? 55
- Some people think law changes human behavior Do you agree or disagree 75
- What are the positive and negative aspects of the connection to outside world including mobile phone, email and social networking? 70
- Most high level jobs are done by men Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women What is your opinion 68
- The advantage of the spread of english as a global language will continue to outweight its disadvantageTo what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experience, observat 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e graduating from universities and they are owning the same skills and knowledge of men. F...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59188354142 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5171629918 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512125405324 0.242375264174 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214241759464 0.0925447433944 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119210041151 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349233533692 0.151781067708 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827019161327 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.