These days, there is an ongoing debate going on among people that whether regions affect the person in becoming successful or not. It is true that person surroundings affects a lot on his/her behavior and in learning new skills . While other argue that , person attitude and skills has a pivotal role in their success. I shall Explain my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many factors which elucidate that native regions have significant effect on the people thinking power. To instance, childhood of Mahatma Gandhi had a deep effect on him to become leader. It can also be taken into account that a person learns a lot from his/her surroundings. Hence, regions affect a lot on the success of the people.
Further Reinforcing, native place of a person provides a sense of seeing world from their view. However, some people have a point that along with regions, many other factors are also responsible in developing a person such as talent, skill set etcetera. A clear example would be of Dhirubhai Ambani, who after leaving his home town learned a lot and started a successful venture. Therefore, a apart from native area, many more factors also play significant role in developing an individual.
To conclude, whilst there are several compelling arguments on this issue , my personal sentiment is that only neighborhood have a direct impact on the success of an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04273504274 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7091630679 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0373967674 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7692307692 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28556331482 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101153283485 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846798889688 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170203855511 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747605087544 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.