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Nowadays, there a uncountable number of problems that people are struggling with, such as pollution, global warming, war, illness outbreaks and terrorism. In my humble opinion the most alarming one of them is pollution. As such, this essay will the pinpoint to reasons for such issue and the provide possible measures that can hep tackle it .
There are myriad of reasons why pollution is the most pressing issue that humanity is facing and the preponderant one of them is the industrial revolution. After the industrial revolution, there is a large increase in the products made which causes pollution to the air and to the soil. besides, the waste generated by such activities contribute to greenhouse gases and the depilation of the ozone layer. Needless to say all of these factors require some effective and immediate intervention to help save our planet.
Steps to deal with such problem are many, but the most significant ones of them are not remote or complicated but feasible and practical. Primarily, government should put more emphasis on recycling which will decrease the number of hard pollutants. Besides strict rules should be implemented on manufacturing plants to go green and this will not decrease the number of gas emissions, but also will help in saving money spent in such activities consequently, these solutions may stop the issue from deteriorating, therefore, making our life better.
In view of discussions outlined above, one can say that manufacturing activities are the main source of the pollution and going green plus, in addition to the use of recyclable materials is the most effective approach to remedy the problem.
Remedied
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21189591078 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89869181979 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6509416998 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119781815455 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479243357538 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790011388579 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832614645634 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053532833063 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.