What are some of the Pros and Cons of extreme/adventure sports?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in extreme sports. There is a wide range of factors that account for why people do extreme sports including bungee jumping, river rafting, skiing, and motorcycle racing. There is an unending debate among people about adventurous sports. This essay will examine pros and cons in detail of extreme sports with help of few examples in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, there are myriad of advantages of the extreme sports. One of the most important is that these sports build self-confidence in individuals. For example, by doing river rafting one overcomes his fear of water, which helps in building his confidence. In addition, such sports help in promoting the positive attitude and building team spirits. The positive attitude benefits people to face hurdles of life confidently. Furthermore, it is irrefutable that sportspersons get fame and money by winning various competitions.
On the other hand, many people believe that extreme sports have few drawbacks because these sports are very risky. Extreme sports done without required equipment and supervision, are very dangerous and even life-threatening. For example, river rafting without wearing life jacket can be risky. Therefore, such events may lead to maiming permanently or even death. In addition, sometimes, people don’t complete study and indulge much in these activities. Therefore, such people cannot find lucrative jobs.
In summary, as explained in aforementioned paragraphs, there are unlimited advantages and disadvantages of adventurous sports. It helps in building confidence, team-spirit and overcoming fear. However, people should perform these sports carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68076923077 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02825696345 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2910409943 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7368421053 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6842105263 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213331286897 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596764672055 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658952343073 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130626677285 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725587906815 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.07 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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