Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad?
These days, there is an unending debate among people about imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In my opinion, it is good to imitate if a celebrity has good reputation off-screen as well. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To begin, there are abundant reasons why imitating celebrities in sports and movies is a good thing. One of them is that young generation gets inspiration from celebrities. For example, if a child makes a footballer his role model and works hard to become a footballer then footballer is an inspirational personality for him. Furthermore, it is irrefutable that teens get motivation from them.
On the other hand, those who argue against imitating celebrities in sports and movies, have a different view and say that it can actually a bad thing. Firstly, it is claimed that if a celebrity has immoral reputation then people get influenced negatively. For instance, recently, a movie celebrity found in carrying illegal weapons. Therefore, following such people is harmful. In addition, there are concerns about wasting productive time by just watching them on TV and doing nothing.
As mentioned in aforementioned paragraphs, there are strong arguments on both sides of the case. In my personal opinion, imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17351598174 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01091610857 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5149441665 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9285714286 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344692310086 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112039093025 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111075556856 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208867619704 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785873652726 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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