In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
Over the past 100 years, human kind has progressed tremendously with the inventions like antibiotics, airplanes, computers and many more. From the era of wheels to the era of computers, we have come a long way. Although all three of the innovations have shaped our lives, in my view antibiotics is the most important invent for the past 100 years. In this post, I will further explain my view point with valid examples.
It would have been very hard for the human civilization to progress further without these miracle drugs. Antibiotics were not present 100 years ago. Penicillin was discovered in 1928 by Scottish scientist Alexander Fleming and it was the era of the 1940s that people began using antibiotics to treat infections. Since then it has been recognized as one of the greatest inventions of the 20th century.
The longer survival of human kind could have been possible with advancement in medical science. Earlier measles, small pox, even flu could turn out to be fatal. The viruses and bacteria which are invisible to the human eye cannot be destroyed by any tool. Before antibiotics, bacterial infections and common illnesses, such as strep throat, poses serious health issues. They are now easily treated.
Survival is the ultimate goal of the human race and to fulfill this goal we began hunting, discovered wheels and fire. We further invented tools for easy preying. When survival becomes less of a concern we started focusing on discovering luxury pursuits like airplane and computer.
To conclude, I believe antibiotic is the most important invent for the past 100 years. Without antibiotics, we could not have been survived long enough for other inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1155234657 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67984348024 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.497808125 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7222222222 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38888888889 7.25397266985 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257187325817 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741596320594 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840519767757 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14388577888 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100377741323 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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