ANY RECENT INVENTION THAT YOU THINK PROVED BENEFICIAL OR DETRIMENTAL TO SOCIETY Preparing for PTE

Ina tech-savvy era , it is irrefutable fact that science and technology has progressed tremendously .A immense number of useful inventions took place in recent years by our researchers and scientist in every field .Many people have a point that science and computers are the most significant discoveries. This essay will discuss the reasons what why computer is indispensable invention of the recent times.

To commence with, there are number of reasons which assert that computer is indeed the most important invention. First and foremost, in all fields whether it is science or medicine, computer has significantly helped in more efficient way. For instance, with the advent of computers , it is now much easier and faster to work and that too with minimal error. Hence , there are numerous reliable ground to support the belief that computer system has greatly helped mankind.

Furthermore, computer also helps in automating the task which drastically reduces the monotonous repetitive task. In office, it has immensely helped a lot by computing complex task in simpler form. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by the prestigious university has asserted that computers are used in every department of office. Therefore, it can be concluded that it is indeed much beneficial to societies.

To recapitulate, this essay discussed that computer makes work faster and efficient in office and in any workplace. Therefore, i would strongly recommend that nowadays without computer we cannot even think of progress and is one of the most important discoveries for mankind.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41365461847 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95755009167 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2819537221 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803715016299 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296152796735 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323512139611 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526266824855 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337955292117 0.0609392437508 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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