In the modern times, young cohorts are massively influenced by their favorite personalities. Many people argue that the impact of the role models on the young brain is long term and therefore this trend should be discouraged while others hold the opinion that this is not the case. In my opinion, youth should not blindly follow their role models and this essay with offer insights supporting this outlook.
A number of reliable grounds suggest that young people need motivation and right guidance from their peers, parent and other surrounding groups to help them excel in any field, ranging from academics to sports or any other extracurricular activities such as music, dance or various forms of arts. For instance, many teenagers are deeply in affection with their ideal football player and try to mimic him in every walk of their life. Moreover, well played match by the favorite player certainly encourages the youngsters to outperform in the local matches.
The major drawback of this fan following is that youngsters sometimes ignore the negative actions of their superstars and engage in undesirable activities. For example, Jai Lalita’s arrest caused fury and violence among the fans despite of her criminal history in the states of TamilNadu.
In a nutshell, young people should learn to identify their role model’s shortcomings and accept the fact that like other humans the role models are also vulnerable for mistakes. I hope, in coming years, youngsters will realize this and carefully follow their role models.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27530364372 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6610495567 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7030863358 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103832985993 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411388205417 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438940173257 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658320926938 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438425284077 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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