Population is increasing day by day. And people need land for shelter and for other needs. Land is a very valuable resource. If i receive a land, i would like to start a small scale business for below poverty women and encourage them to be self-employed.
First of all, in my country there is so much of poverty and in some states discrimination for women has become common. Small scale businesses to train women in different areas such as beauty parlor, interior design, cooking and catering business, homemade jewelry and many more. To start small scale business a spacious land is required.
In addition, owning a land and do whatever i want is a very good feeling. Nowadays, greenery is vanishing, so can do gardening and grow our own vegetables. For example, Women can learn about plants, can do gardening and relax from their busy and stressful life.
Furthermore, owning a land is a advantage and profitable. Many people have different ideas to do if they own a land. For me helping needy women and encouraging them to set up their own business and make them financially independent is like achieving in life.
In conclusion, receiving a land and exhibiting our dreams is a magnificent idea. Whatever we need to do for everything we need land. Helping women by social service and making their life settled is a very good opportunity to learn and also grow in life.
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Hi, I was kind of blank while
Hi,
I was kind of blank while writing this topic. I choose to write on small scale business and later thought, may be i am concentrating only on small scale business and not on land. Can you please guide me how could i improve on this topic. Exactly how do i organize this essay? Write on land or what will i do, if, i get a land? Looks very simple topic but really confusing.
Thank you,
Anju
You need to make TOEFL essay
You need to make TOEFL essay simple. There are no difference to support A or support B. You choose A or B only because you are more familiar with one of them and have more to write with. But the writing method is the same.
First, try to apply following reasons to A or B in any essay topic:
reason 1: save time
reason 2: same money
reason 3: get more info
reason 4: make friends
Suppose you can apply reason 1 & 2 to the essay topic that is 'save time' and 'save money', then you only need to find another one reason by yourself. This will be much easier for you since now you only need to find another one reason.
Or suppose you already have two reasons, but your mind is empty and no idea for the third reason, then you can apply one of those 4 reasons to the essay.
After you have reasons, follow the following pattern:
Para 1: introduction.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions(1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
You don't need to follow this pattern exactly, but this pattern will help you a lot on how to develop the essay body.
Let us know if you didn't get the point.
Thanks a lot. I will try it
Thanks a lot. I will try it again.
Thank you,
Anju
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