Drug intoxication is a serious threat worldwide. Its long term consequences not only damage the health of the drug addict but also massively affect the general public. Many people argue that government plays an important role to curb this menace while others hold an opponent’s view. In my opinion, government as well as individuals can collectively put efforts to fight this social issue.
Government can certainly enforce stringent laws to ban tobacco completely and impose heavy penalties on the violators. Another positive approach to mitigate the risk would be to reward the non-smokers with incentives. Many countries such as the U.S.A and Canada are ahead in the race as they have reward policy in place for non-tobacco users.
On the contrary, there is no skepticism that individuals are solely accountable for their personal verdict on smoking. Therefore, individuals must not engage in smoking habits even if the surroundings are not favorable. For example, many youngsters start smoking under the influence of their seniors or friend circle. To overcome this problem, parents and superiors should keep an eye on the companions of their kids for possible drug abuse and provide the crucial guidance.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that government and individuals should work in integrity to eradicate this evil from our society for the betterment of the mankind. I believe, social media and other electronic media have the potential to spread the awareness among general public and address the harmful effects of consuming tobacco.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ug addict but also massively affect the general public. Many people argue that government play...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...entives. Many countries such as the U.S.A and Canada are ahead in the race as the...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...potential to spread the awareness among general public and address the harmful effects of cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42510121457 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87490445834 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663967611336 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3623228372 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151801340241 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485744773132 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340141430763 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808903301595 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176513704384 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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