You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
1. Say where you think you left the papers
2. Explain why they are so important
3. tell the manager what you want to him/her to do.
Dear Mr Brown,
I am writing in connection with the important papers that I missed out at your hotel. My name is Diana Smith, I stayed at room number 901. I hope you remember I had my conference on 01st February 2018- 05th February 2018 in the Corbet Conference Room. I think since I was in a hurry on the last day of a conference to catch my flight back home, I must have left the papers on the conference table.
The papers are enclosed in an envelope and sealed with the state government stamp on it. Those papers are highly confidential as they contain high-security information about the state affairs. In case those papers fall into wrong hands, it would bring in a catastrophic situation to our nation and apparently my job.
I would highly appreciate if you could immediately search for that envelope and courier me at the earliest on the postal address is given below:
Mrs Diana Smith,
708, Magnolia Avenue,
Jersey City, NJ 07306-1808
I thank you in advance for your due assistance.
yours sincerely,
Diana Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...Mrs Diana Smith, 708, Magnolia Avenue, Jersey City, NJ 07306-1808 I thank yo...
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Suggestion: Yours
...in advance for your due assistance. yours sincerely, Diana Smith.
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...our due assistance. yours sincerely, Diana Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7955801105 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66986342174 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8582535246 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224041279696 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714463157922 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571057702267 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925788742485 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843025594777 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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