The bar graph provides the information about two different reasons of study according to their age group of students and the employer support they got.
Overall it seems that younger students have a career as the highest reason to study in addition to the higher employment support. however older ones have the their interest as the highest reason to study with lowest employment support.
It can be seen that around 80 % under age 26 have the most interest in career with almost 10% in comparison to employer support.Increase in age have decreased the reason career and increases the interest as the reason . Age group 26- 29 , 30 - 39 have the career reasons to about 70% and 60% respectively whereas interest reason to around 10 % and 25% respectively. at the age group 40- 49 have both equal reasons for study is around 40%.the most significantly minimal for career reasons can be seen in age group over 49 which is around 10%.
Employer support is highest in the age group below 26 (60%) followed by steady decrease up to 40 5 at the age group 30-39. After the age of 39 employer support escalate marginally and remained at above 40 % which is lower than the younger ones support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...interest as the highest reason to study with lowest employment support. It can be see...
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...and increases the interest as the reason . Age group 26- 29 , 30 - 39 have the car...
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...on to around 10 % and 25% respectively. at the age group 40- 49 have both equal re...
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...age group over 49 which is around 10%. Employer support is highest in the age g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73300970874 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61340762806 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6256970188 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284128480019 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154854703123 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615713650089 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19979190942 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519963113995 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.