The claim that animals have "rights" has been subject to much of a debate since 1970. Are zoos helping or hurting animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
The role of zoos to preseve animal rights has always been under discussion. While some people think that zoos are assisting and exercising animal rights judiciously, however, other's maintain that zoos should be banned as they are hurting the animals and voilating their rights. This essay will discuss that why zoos should not be banned and be allowed to keep animals in the light of their rights.
Undoubtedly, zoos are playing an instrumental and pivotal role in maintaining animals of various species. Firstly,zoos house a variety of species which include rare species too. Moreover, with in the vicinity of zoo all species are provided with special food and extreme health care under the close supervision of trained as well as specialized medical staff. For instance, panda which is an extinct specie is being flourished at zoos under extra care with special dietary routines and all these acts are being exercised in such a manner that no animal right is being violated. As a result, there exists no reason that why zoos should be banned for helping and maintaining various kinds of animals.
Additionally, it is evitable that zoos try their utmost level and go beyond all limits to provide special treatment and extra care to animals subject to any kind of disease. Furthermore, law governing bodies also keep a strict check and balance on zoos to ensure that species are maintained in such a manner that animal rights are not voilated.
To conclude, zoos are maintaining animals and preserving their rights by ensuring extreme care and vigilance. In my opinion, zoos should not be banned and must be encouraged to house more animals so that various animals can be provided with maximum facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , zoos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06007067138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5876245712 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526501766784 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0279957079 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351714643815 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160422212828 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735606071028 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251956353358 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787510983708 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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