Family

Essay topics:

Family

I am thirteen years old now, can call me a adolescence in terms of form. However, in terms of content, I'm not really an adolescence. My family has two sibling. The relationship of my family is quite fun. Because we have one thing in common is really like technology. My mother also likes to grow flowers, and my father nurtures the dog. The relative between plants and animals is a wonderful combination, is not it?
Key words:
1. adolescence
2. nurtures
3. relationship
4. sibling
5. relative

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... am thirteen years old now, can call me a adolescence in terms of form. However, ...
^
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... of form. However, in terms of content, Im not really an adolescence. My family ha...
^^
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...relationship of my family is quite fun. Because we have one thing in common is really l...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: Keywords
...is a wonderful combination, is not it? Key words: 1. adolescence 2. nurtures 3. rel...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adolescence
...combination, is not it? Key words: 1. adolescence 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. si...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., is not it? Key words: 1. adolescence 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. sibli...
^^^
Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nurtures
...ot it? Key words: 1. adolescence 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. sibling 5. rela...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Key words: 1. adolescence 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. sibling 5. relativ...
^^^
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Relationship
...rds: 1. adolescence 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. sibling 5. relative
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lescence 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. sibling 5. relative
^^^
Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sibling
...ce 2. nurtures 3. relationship 4. sibling 5. relative
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Relative
...ures 3. relationship 4. sibling 5. relative
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... relationship 4. sibling 5. relative
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 420.0 937.175257732 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 87.0 206.0 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.05407580998 3.78020617076 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94261853311 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 127.690721649 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.747126436782 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 130.5 290.88556701 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3475837113 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.5 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.875 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154325136092 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595961754099 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133574537466 0.0603063233224 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170052665373 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.55 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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