1 - You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know
• when you will be arriving and leaving,
• what type of rooms you would like
• and ask them how much the weekend will cost
• also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you well. I intend to write this letter to confirm my booking at your hotel and share the details of my arrival beforehand. I have planned a stay starting from 29th December to 1st January 2023. I shall be arriving with my family which includes 8 people altogether on the early evening of 29th December. It is a long-awaited trip with my family and I want to ensure that we enjoy quality time together with maximum activities.
I would want to book 2 suits to accommodate all my family members. There should be at least 4 rooms in 2 suits. I intend to keep elders in quite separate room so they can rest well and 2 separate rooms for teenagers to enjoy the nighttime with games and activities. I completely understand that it’s a peak season and you must be going fully booked. I would like to inquire about the cost of these weekend days so I can arrange them accordingly. Additionally, as I mentioned earlier, I want to provide the best time for my family so I am curious to know about the amenities and activities you have nearby the hotel so we are not just staying and resting in the room but participating and making the best out of our time together. It would be fair and rational if you could share the cost associated with all the activities or if they are free or charge so we can plan the itinerary accordingly.
I look forward to your swift and outright response.
Yours sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, Hope this letter finds you well. I inten...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...from 29th December to 1st January 2023. I shall be arriving with my family which ...
^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...son and you must be going fully booked. I would like to inquire about the cost of...
^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd outright response. Yours sincerely, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51330798479 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65173076308 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0812621853 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7857142857 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258543659542 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816489564484 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504050433892 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135433603799 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822020413132 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.