Climate has been changing since past many years owing to innumerable reasons. Some people argue that, it is the prime responsibility of the government and big organizations, while others opine it is an individual responsibility. I personally believe that, both higher authority and each citizen have to take part equally to protect the environment. This essay will give assertion on both sides of the contention before delivering plausible conclusion.
On one hand, the government could certainly make more efforts to reduce air pollution. Higher administration can introduce stringent laws on factories and public, so that gas emissions from factories and vehicles which lead to global warming can be reduced. Furthermore, the government could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. Moreover, corporate houses should start inventing technology which does not cause pollution to our environment. For example, in Japan, manufacturing plants are encouraged to use solar, wind or water power.
On the other hand, individuals can also contribute to reducing the carbon contents from the air by many ways. Firstly, people can prefer public transportation rather than using their own private vehicle. For instance, people can use trains or buses to commute. This not only helps to save our fossil fuel but also helps to reduce the surface temperature of the earth. In addition, individuals should be encouraged to stop the use of plastic bags and prefer paper bags.
In a nutshell, we are the reason for this mess and we need to take measures collectively to live in harmony with nature. Hence governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42322097378 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01293111955 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0821269023 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100998244604 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284317494117 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349318152997 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608263672737 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223579114872 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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