To some, construction of beautiful building is merely a waste of money. However for others ,these buildings are a source of aesthetic beauty and are beneficial in mamy other ways. Give you own views.
Buildings are the basic amenities of life. These days many people spending lots of money to increase the glory. Some people believe these spendings are worthful and believe it a wastage of money.i agree the former statement about which i discuss following.
As far as my views are concerned , the main reason to support it, construction of buildings require alot of time and labour. It only enhances the beauty but not adding any value to the productivity to people's time and hardwork. Secondly, in developing countries,less resources are available which needs to be utilize in more efficient mannner rather than being spent on designing the monuments, these resources can be effectively use in welfare of society. Moreover there are alot of other things which need to be emphasized as compared to construction of building ,such as educating more and more people to make our country more developed, also to the medical area which needs more expensive instruments and treatment for the diseases which need more money.
Lastly, its also has a negative impact on our environment. As nee building is constructed , more dust is there , more pollution, to the surrounding environment, as well as people got several kind of respiratory diseases.
In gist, developing new buildings are not a big issue , but money be spent wisely such if it would add some surplus. After all the spendings if there is money left, then we can construct new buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, after all, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07983193277 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84612368903 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7967949314 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.909090909 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174243777925 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667200460962 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315797742994 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102092982923 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256652773092 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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