The older you get, the more difficult life becomes.
Discuss.
Life is a continous journey and who are young one day become old. The older person do not have much easier life and could have face many problems. In this eassy we will discuss about demerit of become older.
To begin with, when person become old the basic problem they will face is to deal with lot of diseases. Old individual immunity system is weak now and no longer supporting as compared to when they are younger. Old person are vulnerable to many disease like infection, cough and cold, in addition to it, their physical health no longer good, having trouble in daily routine jobs due to week eyesight and week legs.
Moreover, older people left alone by their family members on rented apartment or in old age home to live their remaining life. The son or family memebers are not visiting them, leaving elderly people vulnerable to dipression. In addition to it, these retired people living alone in rented apartment are more susceptible to criminals and as per latest statics elederly people are facing 70% more crime rate and they are not safe in their own home now because of servent, as many cases of criminal activity were reported by servant living with elederly people.
To sum up, there are plethore of problems associated with being old and elederly people are suffering alot due to week health and careless behaviour by their childeren or their family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...ot have much easier life and could have face many problems. In this eassy we will di...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... daily routine jobs due to week eyesight and week legs. Moreover, older people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.302490339 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8251213591 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976077535904 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447288480467 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493841000638 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062132695045 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704221471564 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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