It is important for foreginers to know sometjing about the history and culture they live in.
Discuss.
Every individual living in another country should respect local culture and their history but the only way to do so is to know about new country is necessary. In this essay we will discuss merit of being aware about past of country they are living in.
To beign with, people living in or studying or immigrate to new country should respect country's cultural and historical identity. By doing so, it help immigrats to mixed up well with the local neighbours. For example, if people aware about festival of immgrate country and its importance then they completly take part and make new friend easily.
Cultural indentity is another and important aspect of any country, many people moving to new places without knowing the cultural background of the place, left them irritated and frustrated. For instance, Beef eating in canada is very normal thing but in India people respect cows and some states banned cow slaughter, so, if you feel offended than you must come back or learn to live with harmony. being aware of moving in country historical and cultural background is the essance of happiness.
In crux, knowing cultural and historical background of forigen country is very important and plays vital role in the settlement process and gaining trust of the local neighbours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02816901408 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49302405684 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9368233313 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278372592213 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112577855142 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070928593099 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170984698936 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710601241249 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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