You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear sir or madam,
I hope my letter finds you in the best of zeal.
I am writing to thank you for the immaculate arrangements that you managed at your hotel regarding my grandmother’s ninetieth birthday party.
The event was attended by all her old and new friends and family, and all the participants praised the administration of the ceremony. The event was a Hi-tea beginning at 4 PM and concluding at 7 PM. The old lady was overjoyed when she saw the round table sitting plan, and the birthday theme music added to the ambience.
My grandmother’s childhood friends got an opportunity to see each other after many years and they felt honored by the manner the event was organized. They would not stop talking about the days of their youth, when they would meet daily.
I must especially mention the efforts put in by Mr. Zaheer, the musician, who won the hearts of the participants with his artful music play.
Please accept my gratitude, and extend my regards to your staff.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ginning at 4 PM and concluding at 7 PM. The old lady was overjoyed when she saw the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89714285714 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94214138314 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4332821693 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114418214662 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433539926972 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468114925877 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551260952787 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562175836331 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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