Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this change? Good or bad. Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your/own experience.
In this day and age, small shops are picking up and large shopping malls are replacing them. Although this replacing bring many issues for small shop owners, big shopping centers have many advantages for the society and people have further options to choose as well. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss that the large shopping malls are how far good for the market and economy.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support replacing the big shopping centers with small shops. At first, the large shopping malls are effective to decrease the price of products. there is a competition in price among different brands to present a cheap product. For example, there are many cosmetic companies in shopping centers that are trying to represent cheapest products to save their customers.
In addition, while some small businesses may be unable to compete with bigger businesses, the advantage of this competition is to improve the products quality. The companies try to sell their products in higher quality to save their place in the market. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by THM University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of products in different species have produced in better quality after the advent of big shopping centers.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about establishing the large shopping centers, my personal sentiment is that though it damages some small and weak businesses, the large shopping malls are very beneficial for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20564516129 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60492297377 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4260731676 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20738451153 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935811326334 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821536001093 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132327247029 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566241095491 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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