You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful.
Dear Mr. Wong,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the immaculate service and organising the unforgettable 90th birthday of my grandfather. I am very content with your service. The event was on 21st of February in the main ballroom. There were over 100 guests, mainly being elderly friends of my grandfather and a few younger family members.
Firstly, the ballroom was conveniently accessible from the parking lot. For a few guests that use wheelchairs, they were able to join with comfort thanks to the ramps located at the entrance. Additionally, the theme of the party was well thought of and comfortable seats made it relaxing for the guests to enjoy their time. The highlight of the night was the food and people enjoyed it a lot.
Finally, I would like to thank your team for their adequate care, especially “Lily” who went out of the way and helped in making this event memorable.
Yours sincerely,
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- you organised a 90th birthday party 67
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- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9748427673 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85319787321 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8707635201 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222098997069 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681140399332 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497375079662 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121516760533 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724543155601 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.